Roughcut And Feedback

This is a roughcut of our music video. We are going to gain constructive criticism and positive points from our other class members in order to make any changes to our video before we complete the whole production.

FEEDBACK
Constructive criticism
-The lip sync could be clearer at the beginning
-Quite dark lighting in the narrative kitchen scene
-More of the short shot duration would be good to keep the audience engaged
-The singing overlaps in one part of the field scene

Positive feedback
-Engaging music video
-The switch between the narrative and performing keeps it interesting
-Good miming
-The different shots that are used are good (long shots, close ups, over the shoulder etc)
-The slow motion is good and effective
-The locations are varied so keeps the audience wanting to watch more
-Good mise en scene