Pitch Presentation and Audience Feedback

Postive Feedback
-Good use of images with examples
-Very detailed
-Aware of codes and conventions of chosen genre (Alternative pop)
-Clearly analysed Delilah's videos through images and context
-Good introduction so that the audience knew what the presentation was about

Constructive Criticism
-Need to think about who exactly is casting in our video and asking for their avaliability
-Lighting in alley way may not be good, need to think about what time of day, does it have lighting or do we need artificial lighting? After researching into locations, we discovered that there is an alley way with lighting in it throughout the day and night which will suit us for filming.
-Think about exactly where the artist will be singing as she is not involved in the narrative.
-What is the concept? Is it concept or narrative based? After reanalysing our music video we have decided that it is narrative based rather than concept based.
-How does our video conform to Goodwin's theory? Does it conform or challenge?